In the air is tension and a eerie silence. All you can hear is the quiet rustling of the trees. Even though it is broad daylight the setting is still as mysterious!
You can feel the damp mist on your face. You can smell the horrible rotting bodies. You can hear footsteps coming from behind you but they aren’t really there. . .
enchanted and a parallel universe . In the air is tension and a eerie silence. All you can hear is the quiet rustling of the trees. Even though it is broad daylight the setting is still as mysterious !
enchanted and a parallel universe . In the air is tension and a eerie silence. All you can hear is the quiet rustling of the trees. Even though it is broad daylight the setting is still as mysterious !
(a bit like Indiana Jones)!!
Dark gloomy ancient the tomb was left abandoned and alone !!
Dark,deserted and gloomy
Fingers as life like as human fingers trying to lift up the spooky and misticle tomb
The trees were like hnds grabbing the building
Ancient,Mysterious,hiding a hidden treasure,cursed,the trees branches warning not to enter!:-)
never ending darkness
Very spooky guys, now what about describing the atmosphere?
Sounds, smells, feelings?
In the air is tension and a eerie silence. All you can hear is the quiet rustling of the trees. Even though it is broad daylight the setting is still as mysterious!
It’s a gloomy abandoned tomb:-)
Ancient, ruined,abandoned, an Egyptian tomb.
(A bit like Indiana Jones!)
Spooky!
It’s a dark and gloomy place , with wood like hands coveryingtje door to hell | Mia
Luring you into the uncharted ,gloomy ,cave beneath the hanging trees.
You can feel the mist in your eyes and
You can smell the body’s hiding underground , you can hear the footsteps of your imaginary friend but then …
It’s an ugly old man
it looks really mysterious and spooky I can just imagine being there:)
:p;y
Nice comment Daniel k and Mia L there awesome !!
You can feel the damp mist on your face. You can smell the horrible rotting bodies. You can hear footsteps coming from behind you but they aren’t really there. . .
Gloomy, frightening and unknown :0
The rocks fell like rain pouring down from the sky
enchanted and a parallel universe . In the air is tension and a eerie silence. All you can hear is the quiet rustling of the trees. Even though it is broad daylight the setting is still as mysterious !
enchanted and a parallel universe . In the air is tension and a eerie silence. All you can hear is the quiet rustling of the trees. Even though it is broad daylight the setting is still as mysterious !
(a bit like Indiana Jones)!!
Dark,scary,cold,fun,alive
The rocks suffocating the tomb
Hi Year 6. What great creative writers you all are. Well done.
Best Wishes, Mrs Charnley
The men went to work in the mines digging for Cole and the wining went to work in coton mill
Rocks suffercating the lost abandoned misty tomb as the branches are eager to discover the mysterys it holds
Magical over growing, rocky ! The rocky place was like a crumbling cliff
That send looks good year 6 that’s amazeing!